Comments on: Critique…yet again…gf broke up with me!? http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/ Closet Shelving Best Selections Sun, 16 May 2010 00:32:40 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Daft http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-423 Daft Sun, 16 May 2010 00:32:40 +0000 http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-423 I agree a bit with the first answerer; you should shorten it down a bit. Not to say, concise, but to a point where the poem is more of a lasting taste rather than a read. I also noticed that this poem conveys more vivid images than your previous ones. I agree a bit with the first answerer; you should shorten it down a bit. Not to say, concise, but to a point where the poem is more of a lasting taste rather than a read.
I also noticed that this poem conveys more vivid images than your previous ones.

]]> By: Sabrina Is a fan of Muse http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-424 Sabrina Is a fan of Muse Sun, 16 May 2010 00:32:40 +0000 http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-424 Once again I am so sorry. It was remarkable. It flowed very nicely and the real emotion used is what makes it amazing. Nice job and once again I am sorry and I hope things get better soon. Once again I am so sorry. It was remarkable. It flowed very nicely and the real emotion used is what makes it amazing. Nice job and once again I am sorry and I hope things get better soon.

]]> By: Gem L http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-421 Gem L Sun, 16 May 2010 00:32:40 +0000 http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-421 Agree, shorten it down... I guess cut off 2 or 3 stanzas if you're gonna make this into a song unless it's Rap (which is very unlikely!) I think that a song must be in only a single mood. I mean you combined calm sweetness with wrath. It's nice though! Agree, shorten it down… I guess cut off 2 or 3 stanzas if you’re gonna make this into a song unless it’s Rap (which is very unlikely!)

I think that a song must be in only a single mood. I mean you combined calm sweetness with wrath.

It’s nice though!

]]> By: LMD http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-422 LMD Sun, 16 May 2010 00:32:40 +0000 http://www.bestclosetshelving.com/bathroom-shelving/critique-yet-again-gf-broke-up-with-me/#comment-422 AS ALWAYS I THINK ITS GENIUS MY FRIEND AS ALWAYS I THINK ITS GENIUS MY FRIEND

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